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Sunday, April 5, 2015

A(nother) Challenge: The Gypsy's Map pt. 1

This is my last week of Easter break and I have a couple of things I want to do before going back to work, one of which is actually writing or at least completing a story. While reading through some old journals, I found a medieval/semi-fairy tale story that I started about 5 years ago and decided to try and finish it. I suppose the urge and interest was increased by the fact that I visited friends at my alma mater (now that's weird to say) Saint Katherine College where they are taking a fairy tales class and had to write ones of their own. Thus I feel inspired to do the same. Also, a little boy that I read a portion of it too from years ago is still asking about it and I would like to let him know how it ends.

So here's my plan. I am going to post pieces every day of my progress on the story and, hopefully by the end, I'll have a new story on my hands. Yes, yes, yes, dear reader, I do realize that I am trying to do yet another challenge, which I know I have a poor track record of actually completing. But I am going to do it. And I have better chances this time since I'm only keeping it to a week and I am not working this week. Therefore, I'm going to cheat today and post what I had previously written. I pray your forgiveness in advance as it's going to be long so I'm going to break it into two pieces. Hope you all enjoy the journey as much as I do.

The Gypsy's Map (pt. 1)

Many years ago a knight named Oliver came from small village now long forgotten by men. All was peaceful in his village and all the area around it. Resolved not to become idle and self-consumed, Oliver worked for his fellow villagers doing odd jobs, as if he’d never been knighted. Then, an old man came to the town. His clothes were thin and dirty, and he carried a large walking stick carved with many intricate designs. As he walked, he limped greatly and leaned heavily on his stick. Around his waist, he wore a rope belt from which hung an assortment of talismans for, you see, he was a gypsy. When they saw him, all the villagers rushed to their homes and locked their doors. Oliver alone was unafraid. Having faced greater dangers than one old gypsy man, he approached the stranger with kindness.

“Hast thou travelled long, good sir?”

“Many a weary mile on old tired feet,” was the answer given. Looking up from the dusty ground, the gypsy saw his greeter’s face. “Thou art not of my brethren. Why then dost thou greet me?”

“Tis the teaching of our Lord Jesus Christ to give shelter to the stranger. Come with me.”

“Saint Sara bless thee for thy kindness.”

The young knight led the old man to small hut he had built himself. The door opened to reveal a modest room nicely furnished and clean. Seating the old gypsy on a chair, Oliver went to a pot emitting wonderful aromas. He then proceeded to spoon the stew into earthenware bowls. After encouraging his guest to begin eating, the young man cut a few slices from a loaf of bread and filled two cups with water. The two men ate in silence, the one fulfilling the hunger gained from days of travel and the other not wanting to disturb him. Thus went their evening meal. When the gypsy had eaten his fill, Oliver led him to his own bed. At this, the man balked.

“No, sir. I shall not take thy bed. Thou has been gracious to this old gypsy . . .”

“And one more kindness cannot hurt thee,” the knight finished.

Seeing that his host would not be moved, the gypsy lay down, closed his eyes, and immediately fell into a deep sleep. Smiling to himself at his guest’s slumber, Oliver drew the covers over the sleeping man and took his repose beside the dying fire with his sword at his side.

The next morning, Oliver awoke to find his pot already brewing and the old gypsy gone. Going to the stewpot, he sniffed its contents. He nose told him his meal would be delicious. As he was stooped over the pot, the knight’s guest came in holding a strange bouquet of herbs and flowers. The old gypsy smiled seeing the look of surprised pleasure so easily seen on Oliver’s face.

“It pleases thee, I see.”

“Yes but thou didst not need to go to all this trouble. ‘Twas my place to prepare our meal.” The guest shook his head.

“I took no more trouble than thee when thou didst take me in and in this small way, I may repay thy kindness.”

Thus was the knight rebuffed and forced to be a guest in his own home while the gypsy finished preparing the meal. After a few minutes, it was finished and he spooned into their bowls a mash-like substance yet it had a unique, foreign flavor that delighted the senses. Once both had had their fill, Oliver asked the origin of their meal. The old man sighed heavily and his brown eyes grew sad.

“From my homeland, many miles away. I was not always the weary vagabond that thou dost see before thee. Once I had been a farmer and physician amongst my people. But it seems the saints and God most holy did not desire this to remain so. Our land suffered a drought like none that even our elders had ever seen. We cried out to Saint Sara for help but we received no reply. Then,” his eyes began to fill with tears and his voice faltered, “people began to die, our children and our elders. They looked like raisins in the noonday sun. Never before have I seen anything more tragic or pitiable.
“Finally, the few of us who were still alive left to find a new home. But on our way, we met a wild-looking man. His eyes seemed to stare at us and still not see us. He waved a sheet of parchment, crying that it led to the source of the drought. We all believed he had lost his sanity due to the lack of water. But we could not refuse his parchment for he would not let us pass until we took it. And so began our woeful journey. I am sorry,” he said suddenly. “I should not burden thee with my troubles.”

“No, thou has not troubled me in the least, good sir,” answered the knight much intrigued. “Do you still have the parchment the crazed man gave you?”

“Yes,” the gypsy shrugged, “though I did not take much notice of it once we had it.”

He moved to where his satchel sat and looked through its contents. Finally, he pulled out a worn sheet of paper and offered it to Oliver. The knight took it with great solemnity. But when he looked at it, his brow immediately furrowed.

“I’m afraid some of the ink has faded. There is naught here but a small portion.”

“’Twas always that way, good youth,” the gypsy replied. “Another reason we disregarded its former bearer.”

“Wast thou not curious in the least to know why it had been made so?”

“We did not pay it much mind, considering its former owner. What curiosity we had was satisfied with a short verse on the parchment itself. Thou canst find it here along this edge.” He turned the map so the knight was now looking at it upside down. “One of our young men found it whiles passing the time on our journey.”

Oliver examined the writing carefully. It was written in an even, delicate hand. And thus it read:

Trust thy faith and not thy eyes.
Be thou cunning, brave and wise.

The knight studied the couplet for several moments. His mind mulled their meaning and significance. The old gypsy watched the young man curiously, wondering what had intrigued his host so much. Nonetheless, he did not interrupt Oliver’s reverie. At last, the knight re-acknowledged his guest’s presence.

“Wouldst thou mind if I kept this map?”

“Take it with my blessing, good sir. May it bring you better fortune than it has its previous bearers. Well, I must be going.” The old man rose and began to gather his few belongings.

“Wait,” Oliver cried, surprised at his guest’s sudden behavior. “It will soon be sundown and it is quite a distance to the next village.”

The gypsy seemed to take no notice. He continued filling his sack and then put it on his back.

“No,” he stated finally as he headed for the door. “I cannot impose on thy hospitality any more. Besides,” he paused half-way through the door, “the rest of my people are waiting for me.”

“Where exactly are your people?” the knight queried aloud.

The man stopped and looked out towards the setting sun.

“Waiting in the arms of Saint Sara,” he replied quietly and continued walking out of town.

Oliver watched until his guest was no more than a black spot against the sun. Then he went back inside his home and prepared his evening meal. That night, he prayed for protection over the old gypsy wherever his travels led him.

The next morning, Oliver gathered all the maps he possessed and began comparing them against the old gypsy’s map. He looked for any recognizable landmarks so he could find the starting place. Finally, he found a large rock called “The Sentinel” on both the gypsy map and one map of a small woodland area. Smiling, he leaned back in his chair and took a few deep breaths. He then got up and began gathering his equipment and provisions.

Stepping out the door, the knight gazed out across the land stretching before him. His armor glinted defiantly, boasting scuffs and gashes from skirmishes with bandits. On his hip rested his trusty sword, docilely waiting ‘til its master should have need of it. Maps, food, spare clothes, flint, and a tinder box were stuffed in a pack upon his back. As he stood there pondering the path ahead of him, Oliver fingered an amber-entombed piece of white heather that hung around his neck. Shoving the pendant under his shirt, he walked to the nearby stable.

“Capell.”

A chestnut-hided horse trotted out to the knight and nuzzled against his shoulder. Oliver gazed deeply into the horse’s eyes and it seemed to understand what was in its master’s mind. Once saddled and bridled, he mounted the stead and looked one last time upon the quiet village that had been his home.

“Fare thee well, good home. May the blessings and protection of our Lord rest upon thee.” With that benediction, he turned his back on the village with the thought in his heart that he may never see it again.

Several days passed before the knight reached the Sentinel stone. It stood at the entrance of an avenue of trees between which hung a thick fog like cobwebs. Like a guard it sat imposing and impassive, daring any to enter the misty passage.

Oliver dismounted Capell and pulled out the gypsy’s map. He had reached the only place pictured on the map. Now, he did not know what to do. A path led away from the Sentinel but led to blank space on the parchment. Methodically, Oliver pondered in his mind what could be next.

“What dost thou desire?”

The knight drew close to his mount and placed a hand on his sword. His eyes darted all around, searching for the speaker.

“Who goes there?”

“What dost thou desire?” The voice sounded as old as the earth and seemed to reverberate through the air like thunder.

Calming Capell, the knight stepped out with his hand still ready on his sword. He had not seen or heard anyone enter the wood since he had. As far as he could tell, no one was hiding behind the trees around him. The only place left was the Sentinel and the fog-laden avenue and nothing there had changed.

“Who goes there?” Oliver repeated.

“What dost thou desire?” came the voice a third time.

“I desire to know the truth,” answered the knight.

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